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Finally, we found time to investigate the chamber. And while Ogremon seemed a bit disappointed that there were no more dragon skulls to bash in, we really enjoyed the silence and nearly calm atmosphere of the room. That was when Veli the great discoverer found 'something shiny' beneath a half crumbled wall. A few strikes with a certain bone club, and the wall was no more. “Whoa, it's beautiful! Niki, what is that?” “I... have no clue.” “But it looks important!”
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Airdramon says: Nothing, as it digivolved into Skullairdramon, and everypony knows that they're not talkative.
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*goatheart Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me likey, and the design :D very cool
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:iconrifgocrazy2:
I must agree with all of Rad's comments. :) You've definitely improved in just the short time I've seen your writing. The bond Niki and Gizamon share feels very real and you find yourself rooting for them even though their individual personalities may not be very attractive. Keep up the good work!
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:iconsacredinsanity7:
Aww thank you so much! i... i just do my best every time and hope it's sufficient. XD
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:iconmadcookiefighter:
Really well done, sacred. Characters are great as well as the story telling.
But I didn't expect less of you :3
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:iconsacredinsanity7:
Aww be quiet, you know i can't take compliments! XD
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:iconmadcookiefighter:
Well, bad for you I already said it XD
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:iconradiationfox:
I don't think I've ever made so many comments within a span of 20 minutes in my whole time of being on dA! Anyways, I've gotta say that I loved your entry. You did very well not just in the writing of it, but also at doing an amazing job at hitting the nail of other's characters. Not to mention you vividly brought to life Niki and Gizamon, and their qualities just really stand out in this entry. Gizamon's bond with Niki makes me happy, and I caught myself smiling when Ogremon carried her through the tunnels. All the additional images you pinned on up top were awesome, and you did an amazing job with hitting my character's personalities on the nail too.

Very well done! x3
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:iconsacredinsanity7:
I feel honored, honored, honored, *collapses* And thank you especially for the thing with the character, I'm always incredibly nervous when writing characters not designed by me, as I always think to get out of character no matter what i do... XD
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